07 May 2008

term II





I think this version works better, but misses something too. Any votes?

2 comments:

mickey said...

they both work. good lyrics below too. not only works for country but for jeff buckley as well. kind of in the mode of "you should've come over." ;)

Unknown said...

I like this version. Have you ever tried it as a haiku?

BTW - I completely agree about the Jeff Buckley reference. It is like Lover You Should Have Come Over.