The last verse is so great - and mysterious. I'll admit - I'm not sure what you were trying to convey. Still (paraphrasing) - that street looked so empty on a sunday - is a GREAT line.
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The last verse is so great - and mysterious. I'll admit - I'm not sure what you were trying to convey. Still (paraphrasing) - that street looked so empty on a sunday - is a GREAT line.
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